a sweet cliche, my curios kiss
elaborate, to be taken back
so generously I share this gift,
in eager showers, bric-a-brac
of lisps and sighs, this trinket kiss
my Valentine
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my kurios kus,'n soet cliché
om terug te neem, oordrewe gegee
vrygewig deel ek soentjies mee
gretige stortvloed, veerligvry
lispel en sug, tierlantyntjie myn
my Valentyn
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Fun write
In a list
A contest entry
- Short and meaningful by tender-butterfly.
470 points, ended September 26, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice
First of all thank you so very much for taking the time to enter.
This write covers what is wanted.
I love this.
Well done and all the best to you
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Please let me know when you post another contest, Precious.
I loved this contest -- it was fun.
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Awwww, what a sweet write.
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My grandmother used to call those 'friendship kisses' yankee dimes. Where she got the expression heaven only knows. The poem and picture is just 'cute as a button'. Another of her favorite sayings. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Very cute Makes the reader smile.. i love your word choice, so beautifully fits in with the rest of the write. WHich is the other langyage?
love and cheers, shuvi
ps- i soooooo love your last line
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Wonderful!
You are always a blessing to read.
I adore your poetic heart, thanks for sharing.
Keep up the wonderful works, and all the best
Within this contest!
Much Love~ 
-Timothy aka poeticweaver
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