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Reach for a Star

Love her,
But i'm falling in
love with you.

I say your gorgeous
but you don't think
it's true.

Star,
Why am i falling
so hard for you.

My stomach starts
to churn when i
see your face.

My heart goes
a flutter
when you close
the space-

between us-

So sitting close
this starry
night.

Everything goes
a blur and suddenly
i'm putting up a fight.

Not to kiss you,
take you in a
passionate embrace.

I close the distance
between us-
my heart (yours 2) A race.

I kiss you deep,
with all
i can do.

Star,
i'm no longer
falling for you.

I've fallen.

So i'm reaching
for a beautiful star.

Author notes

umm.. not real. it's from a story n' stuff.

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  • myXheartXsings
    September 24, 2007
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    It's beautiful, whether real or not. I really liked your entry and thank you. good luck