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Windows of Essence

To is fro
As chewing gum is to desk
As paper is to pen

Eye is to beauty of beholder
As sight is to marvels
As colour is to rainbows

Gold is to starry twinkles
As ocean is to sandy shores
As wind is to locks of hair

Eye is to emotions
As tears are to soft cheeks
As smiles are to delight

Freedom is to humanity
As feathers are to peace
As eyes are open to the world

Author notes

An idea that crossed my mind

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A contest entry

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  • Nocturnal Serenade
    October 1, 2007
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    Its absolutely beautiful!


  • Treshawna
    September 26, 2007
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    WOW!!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM. BEAUTIFULLLLLLL


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 24, 2007

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    what wonderful similes and comparisons in this piece, very well done and i think it works well with the picture prompt. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • Number 13
    September 24, 2007

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    Ohhhhh, I LOVE this!
    Such a beautiful idea and a beautiful write.
    :]

    Thanks for entering <3