I couldn't stay.
After all, what was left for me
If I couldn't change?
The same old life,
The old faces,
The same smells, and sights,and sounds;
But worst of all
I would be forever forced into a world
With an absense of excitement.
How could I be with someone who
Is resistant to change?
Who could never come out of his daily routine
And really live life?
How could I be with someone who
Won't grant me a simple request?
You know I've always wanted a puppy.
But you always said
"No."
Your excuse was too much work and responsiblity,
But I know the real reason is
A new creature would be an intrusion into your daily life.
So, even though I love you,
And always will in some way,
I'm leaving for a new life...
One with a dog.
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a response to "The loss of your touch"
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This is such a sweet aqnd innocent poem and I really love this alot. I love how you sway the wording to the poem and how the over all concept of the whole dog is interesting. any ways blissfully beautiful work and keep it up
Signed, Paul
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What a great response to Tim's piece! Thanks for adding this in the challenge! You did a great job on it!!! Thanks for writing for the challenge!
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