Looking out the window, I see
A very large tree.
Its branches are curved and are ready to steal
A very fine meal.
I think I hear it saying my name
Very quietly- through the rain
It blows in the wind, pulling me close
In a very odd pose.
Looking out the window, I saw
A very large lawn.
And on the lawn, was a black cat.
Ready to take a nap.
It stared at me, its eyes full of glee
And the I started to see
The ghosts, the ghouls, coming closer,
Thinking to haunt me.
Right then and there, I swear,
I wanted my mommy.
I screamed and ran through the house
Trying to find a way out.
Looking behind me I see a clock
Just then, it struck 5, and it mocked.
The shadowy creatures fading away…
Anxiously waiting for 365 days.
Author notes
option 5- inspired by choice A!!
I'm eleven years old.
This was the funnest to write out of ALL my poems that I have written.
Just for some informatin, the "365" in the last line is pronounced "three sixty five," not "Three hundred and sixty five," Because that doesn't flow well
A contest entry
- 15 and Under ONLY ~ Win A Gold Membership in our Halloween Contest! by Amunet Wolfbane.
6000 points, ended November 14, 2007, 55 entries
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Comments
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Very nicely done. I really like how you've put the imgaery in place here. Good luck in the contest. I really like this
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A wonderful lttle poem you have cleverly created here. Your words are sure sounding like you have a lot of fun with this piece Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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You have done a very nice job with this one here rhyming seems a bit off here and there but that's not such a big deal
Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck
Leander -
Great poem! it's really imaginative. good luck in the contest
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Good job. Thanks for entering.
Lots of luck to you.
Brian -
This was very nicely done darling! You are very creative and it has a very strong Halloween feeling but at the same time it's not predictable. Good luck in the contest, love! And Have a safe and Happy Halloween!
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Very wonderful job, you have a good imagination. This was scary. Keep up the great writeing, and good luck in the contest.
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well done, I really like this, very imaginative and very creative, a write to be proud off. well done and good luck! x
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aww this is so much fun to read! really refreshening. "Its branches are curved and are ready to steal" what a nice line!! keep writing little friend. ^-^
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this is funny. i wish you well in this contest t hat you have entered. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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You're awesome, what a good poem... and it's about one of my favorite holidays! Great job, keep up the good work!
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hehe Sweet as everything you write!
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