Will I find true love, I may never know
All I know is that I'm letting go.
I thought you loved me, but I was wrong
So I've finally decided to move on.
I will no longer fall into a dark cold place
Everytime I see your face
Even though you tore my skin apart
And drilled a hole in my heart.
I'm finally going to let these wounds heal
Because the love we had for each other was never real.
Will I find true love, I may never know
All I know is that I'm finally letting go.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well written...btdt...better to let go than stay in a love-less relationship...keep looking...LM
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Good work, I love the repetition at the beginning and end, and the rhyming was very good, it didn't take away from the meaning of the poem.
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Awesome!
your really good at this. you rhyme and get your point across without it being all funny sounding. i love your style!
Mercedes
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