We always hold hands in public
People from school stare
My love, with her radience and attitude
Flicks a middle finger.
"You know where I'd like to put this?"
I can't help but laugh
She's rude, in a sweet, adorable way
The evil twinkle in her eye,
I see it.
We carry on walking, as if they were invisible.
It's our daily walk to the park
She loves nature, a little bit more than I do
She tells me off when I drop rubbish.
"Think about the environment!"
Our family isn't ok with it
But we don't care.
We aren't ashamed to kiss and hold each other,
In public.
Nobody should be, just because I don't abide
By the "laws of nature"
Doesn't mean I'm any less human. I love,
Just like anyone, I sleep, breathe, think...
"I love you."
Author notes
Ermm I guess it expresses my views. I am trying to image a couple being together.
Enjoy!
A contest entry
- Why is it such a big shamble that so many people are ashamed of? by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
600 points, ended October 9, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - l0VE/HATE by s p i r i t song.
300 points, ended October 23, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice
I liked this, espeacially your use of the word rubbish instead of litter or trash. I mean it mad it all seem more so nice.
I really liked this
good luck in the contest.
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awww this was a beautiful write and so wonderfully written i could just image the scene and the feeing if not caring what people think
so beautifully done thankyou for entering
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