Show me to love unconditionally,
to let my passion go
without worry of anything .
What it could truly mean
to embrace the emotions within,
and not fear letting anyone see it.
Show me to love,
for my heart has been void of such things.
Scorned from relationships in the past,
pulling me deep into my shell/
Throwing myself
into empty relationships,
just to feel the watmth of a body
next to mine.
Never to really feel fulfilled.
Show me to love,
for I long not to lose a woman like you.
You bring such happiness
just from your smile,
and your caring ways comfort me so.
Never before
have I felt anything like this,
and probably never will
with any other woman.
Show me to love,
for I long to please you
and show you the feeling in my heart,
which I have for you.
A contest entry
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475 points, ended August 14, 2008, 36 entries
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Passionate.
Show me to love,
for I long not to lose a woman like you.
You bring such happiness
just from your smile,
and your caring ways comfort me so.
Never before
have I felt anything like this,
and probably never will
with any other woman.
Wow! This stanza was filled with passion and romance! Great job and good luck!
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