You see the world different.
When things don’t go the way you want them.
It upsets you. You want to cry because
it is a lot to leave with and deal with.
Things have to be a certain way.
You are scared. You want things
To work out. When things don’t
Work out. You get so frustrated
Inside. You would like things to
stop changing on you because
It is very hard on you, it makes
You stressed out when change
Happens. All your life you have
Tried to run the other way but
Teachers and other people push
You in the direction of change.
Sometimes you feel like screaming
And crying because your body goes
On sensory overload and too much
Information and things to do. You
Want to hide inside yourself but you
Are always pulled out of your shell.
But you are happy with things the
Same but you won’t learn anything
When things are the same. You are
Always being told that change is
good for you. It helps you grow
As a person. It helps us learn new
Things, meet new people. It expands
Our horizons. Change also makes us
Stronger. Change is good for all of us.
9-23-2006
By Jennifer
Also with nobody help on writing this.
Author notes
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Comments
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You really opened up in this one. I know exactly what u are talking about because my son likes things to stay the same. He has a routine that he does and when that routine gets messed up, he gets mad. He has to have things go the same all the time or its all bad. You have expressed how he and you feel so perfectly and I can't wait to show him this poem in a few years so he can relate to it. I will be honored to have him know and see your work.
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I like what you wrote , Its how you feel
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It's not a poem. It's a paragraph that you made into a skinny column on the page. There is no original or artistic content at all in this piece.
Try to use imagery and original phrasing to show how you feel to your readers instead of just explaining a situation. If you have trouble understanding what I mean or why I think this is not really a poem, please do a web search for "show don't tell" and read some of the articles available to explain the literary concept. This could help your writing vastly. -
Very good. I liked it a lot. I like the writing style. Not a lot of people do that. I the meaning.
~jen
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