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Hear The Wind

In a westward wind
On a chilling breeze
A whisper spoken low

Dropping down
To the weakened knees
While the stormy gusts will blow

    And in the silence
    Bemoan despair
    And clasp your heart in stone

    And in the sound
    The breaking heart
    Hear the wind softly moan

In an aching beat
On a shaking hand
A trinket coldly lies

A secret told
To a wounded man
Beneath a blood-striken sky

    And in the silence
    Bemoan despair
    And clasp your heart in stone

    And in the sound
    The breaking heart
    Hear the wind softly moan

And in the sound
  The breaking heart
    Hear the wind softly moan

Author notes

A song I just wrote... I'll be working on music for it as well. The melody sounds good, I just need to get some background music for it.

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  • azlyn gold member
    September 27, 2007

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    How lovely and just flows so well! I will love to hear the music and your voice sing this!

    Blessed Be~
    Az