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Complexity

Complexity
A maze with no end in sight
More dimensions then you can stand
Feeling like you are in swirling sand
So many possibilities you just want to drown
Twists and turns
Ins and outs
ups and downs
She is me, but she is you
He is you, but he is me
I am everyone and yet I am no one
you are me, but I am you
Yet we aren't each other
Confusion sets in
You think it is psychotic babble
You don't get
The complexity within

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  • Zombina
    March 23, 2008
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    I totally get this man.



    Its so frustrating....v_v


    nice job!!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 24, 2007

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    lifes lesson

    I know where your coming from I have written a poem just like this one it is a feeling of chaos, constant lessons I have not posted because some people will view it as psychotic babble, but it is something that everyone has experienced but are not able to put it to words.


    • LadyOfFate
      September 24, 2007
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      go post stuff that sounds like psychotic babble I mean I did and I think it sounds great. thanks for the comment


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 24, 2007
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    lesson of life causes so much confussion sometimes you feel surrounded by chaos