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Till Morning

Standing above you
high heels, black leather, long thighs
sheer slinky skin exposed
barely covered breast, I'm at your mercy
red lips waiting to taste
your tentative kisses, hand caress skin
in a gentle motion, desires becoming more intense
nails puncture skin
body responds, leans in closer
hunger in hand till morning

Author notes

Prompt: Picture Inspire

A contest entry

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 25, 2007
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    this is sweet and I like the way each line spoke for itself.

    Riftkin

  • goalsv
    September 24, 2007
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    Great job with the picture as the prompt. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.


  • Desire gold member
    September 24, 2007

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    Wow!!

    I see a lot of my Favorites entered the same contest
    Wow!! I see this will be a hard contest to judge
    What images You have brought forth busy one
    -takes out squeegee-

    Thank You for sharing this

    Best wishes to You in the contest!
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 24, 2007

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    This was an awesome piece my dear sister. Ilvoed each line. This was sweet and ...well..great job
    You always amaze me with your beauty.
    good luck to you in the contest hun.
    tory


  • NakedHeart
    September 24, 2007
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    Perfect.

  • NakedHeart
    September 24, 2007

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    This is really great. You did really well with this. You should write more like this. You have a wonderful way with words.

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