Sweet rush of death
Comes quickly
No time for one more breath
Now I am gone
My lifeless body now trapped in a car
The tires are still spinning
They cut my hair from the twisted metal
How sad his eyes look
There are fire trucks with flashing light
Ambulance driver comes out
The other man says
"All life signs are negative"
We did not get here in time
The dark veil of death
has a hidden door
No pain
No sorrow
No breathing
No love ones
No regrets
No time
Is the end or the beginning?
Death is an illusion or is it life?
Death comes
When we least except it
No matter what, we are doing
Life
Death
Funeral
Now their
No
Pain
Sorrow
Breathing
Love ones
Regrets
Time
Sweet peace of death
Author notes
Please do not laugh have not done this before I gave it my best shot. It on the about about Breathing
A contest entry
- Answer Me Back pt 2! by Kylaya Halon.
450 points, ended September 28, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Brenda,
Congrat on the Bronze!!!! This is wonderful!!!! I love it!! What a great job you did on this one! Fantastic my dear friend!!!
and much love
Nyetta
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Yes...I like much lol. this was a well written piece, I can guest which of my poems you used...but you have to out it in your author's notes...please
. I loved the imagery and the atmosphere you created...so sad...yet lluring to read. Thnk you for entering my contest! I wish you much luck...
And May Your Muse Forever Inspire You
K.V
The Hostess...
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