My love for you
is epic and will endure.
It is painted in the colours
of all seasons and heard
in the ocean's tidal roar.
It is written on every wind that blows;
seen on the sky's screen at sunset
and in every flower that grows.
My love for you
will outlast empires, and when
the last star dies, my love will rise
and comfort you again.
A contest entry
- Dead Stars by Virgoan.
500 points, ended October 12, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Woo me with your gentle words. by The-Phoenix.
450 points, ended December 11, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"My love for you
will outlast empires, and when
the last star dies, my love will rise
and comfort you again"
That stanza is simply divine. I cannot put into words how wonderful and stunny this peice is.
Thank you so much for your entry.
~Phoenix -
I like the mood of this piece. Certain and softly said.
"written on every wind that blows;
seen on the sky's screen at sunset" - Love these lines.
Thanks so much for sharing and best of luck.
Keep the ink flowing.
VIRGOAN
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Beautiful declaration here - so difficult to describe such emotions as loyalty, devotion, and love. Excellent job conveying these emotions with this moving write
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Absolutely Amazing ...
in its divine promise! It is accomplished.
Well done, Bill. You have penned a poem of eternal essence: Hope Supreme within depth and beauty.
Thank you, Poet.
Love
Myra
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Bill this is beautiful! "It is written on every wind that blows,seen on the sky's screen at sunset"..Breathtaking words you have penned here my friend, with real density..Good luck Bill...mal
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