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Blue Ocean Of Love

Intrinsic thoughts of you

Roll on waves

Through the sea of my mind

Submerging me into an azure

Blue ocean of love

Kissing my soul with

Ripples of passion

Longing for us to be together

As white stallions caress

The golden sands of my heart.

A contest entry

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  • Virgoan
    October 9, 2007

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    Your words caress my sleeping heart. I like the tone put into this and the way you delivered the words.

    Nicely done, poet!

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck.

    VIRGOAN


  • Swtpoetryman
    September 24, 2007

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    A FINE PIECE, INDEED!

    Thanks for giving me the heads up on this one, Sugar! GOOD LUCK in the contest with it! I enjoyed it, indeed -as I love the blue sea and I'm crazy about love SWEET love, to boot! He! He! Thay are both a thing of beauty as this poem is.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    Here come three white stallions now to caress the golden sands of your heart. I wrote one one I got home from THE BIG E late last night called CASTLES IN THE SAND! We must be reading each others minds, Baby!


    • onesugar gold member
      September 24, 2007
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      Hey there my Swtpoetryman

      Great minds think alike!

      Thank you for your wonderful comment

      So glad you enjoyed it.

      Love ya ~sugar~


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    September 24, 2007

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    you shall win! this was soft sensual and very romantic sugar i loved this a whole lot i am a sucker for these types of writes hon.


    • onesugar gold member
      September 24, 2007
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      Hiya Ju Ju

      Thank you for your wonderful comment

      I love it when you breeze by

      Love ~sugar~


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    September 24, 2007

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    WONDERFUL WRITING

    STUNNING WRITING HERE. SUCH POWER WITHIN THE WORDS. WORDS OF PASSION AND LOVE OF DESIRE FOR WANTING TO BE WITH SOMEBODY THAT IS ALL POWERFUL. WONDERFUL WRITING AND IMAGERY. WELL-WRITTEN SUGAR

    WAYNE
    XX

    • onesugar gold member
      September 24, 2007
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      Hey there Wayne

      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.

      Always a pleasure for me to have you read.

      Love ~sugar~ xx


  • esroddo silver member
    September 24, 2007

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    Now that is poetry; outstanding write my beautiful sister. This write is so beautiful I enjoyed every word
    LISA


    • onesugar gold member
      September 24, 2007
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      Hey there Lisa

      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment

      you made my day.

      Love ~sugar~


  • Ephiphany
    September 24, 2007

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    Hey sis

    i like this beautiful indeed. You have poured out a differnt side of yourself, and it shows beautifully. Well written my gorgeous sister.

    e


    • onesugar gold member
      September 24, 2007
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      Thank you my dear sis

      Just a little wishful thinking.

      Always appreciate your reading

      Love ~sugar~


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 24, 2007

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    This is absolutely brilliant. Your words roll down the page like the tides rolling to the shore.

    All the best in the contest...Sue


    • onesugar gold member
      September 24, 2007
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      Thank you Sue

      I am in a better place today.

      As always your comments are appreciated and valued

      Love ~sugar~

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