If you want me let me tell you, I got real attitude
ready for a real good time, come near and you'll get screwed.
Lusty thoughts and hips await, breasts for you to suckle
so if you've got that throbbing feeling, come undo this buckle.
A little scratchin' and a nibblin' as I pick up your arousal
guiding it to wetter places, quick come inside my corral.
I thrust and buck real good you know and you'll soon explode within
as I'm the kinda girl who can take you for a spin.
So if you've got the balls come on and show me what you've got
'cos i'm one girl who loves seduction and right now I'm feeling hot.
Author notes
10 lines
Picture prompt
http://www.phantasm777.com/vampiress/lilith2.jpg
A contest entry
- PIF 10 lines ADULT ONLY 18 + by Riftkin.
750 points, ended September 25, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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now there is that word again - 'suckle' being used. i'll suckle if you buckle my senses into next week, failing that you could spank me sideways with a spatula - a good poem.
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Oh lordy did I write that
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this is one hot seduction piece for this picture, I love the images that you allowed my mind to bring forth. the heat pour off the screen causing me to feel the warmth being offered.
Riftkin -
This presentation is HOT! What a sultry, erotic and tastefully written entry!
Good luck to you
Des
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Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!!
Wowzers
What a HOT piece You have penned Sweet Thang
Wow!! Certainly give some serious images
within the mind
Oy!!
-takes out squeegee-
(squeek squeek)
Best wishes to You in the contest!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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damn this was awsome and a wonderful take on the prompt so beautifully expressed with emotion and sensual feeling
well done
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Love your attitude
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Holy Moley you sure know how to turn up the heat in here, wonderful write here hun... very sexy
Karen
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