So weak I am, so weak I shall be,
your love dangled in front of me.
Love so tempting like silver or gold,
do anything to have and to hold.
Force greater then my own self control,
feelings take over my very soul.
I could not resist your looks and charms,
fell into those strong and loving arms.
Into temptaion I fell for you,
defenseless and weak you broke through.
Came and loved me like never before,
now you are gone, left me wanting more.
Sweet kisses like wine drew me in deep,
pleasant dreams of you invade my sleep.
How could this be wrong, it feels so right.
held safe in your arms holding me tight.
Still temping to me, love will not cease,
each passing day sees longing increase.
The power of love can be so strong,
safe in your arms is where I belong.
Author notes
Prompt... temptation
In a list
A contest entry
- AllPoetry Extravaganza--3 Month Gold and Silver Membership by Violet Moodswing.
1500 points, ended November 28, 2007, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful use of the prompt. I've found myself feeling this way man a time. I do hope things work out for you. Keep up the good work, and good luck in your contest
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Great rhyming and the picture is perfect for your piece. It was a delight to read this. Good luck in the contest.
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lol, nice! I thought this was a spiritual poem by the preview. It is a good description of having ones hearstrings moved for a moment in time. Well done!
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There's an almost spiralling fluid of spirituality from this piece, it's like toasting an eternal feeling for a love that will not disappear. Knowing it like this, then an after death experience could even feel like it, I would imagine! Lovely sentimentality.
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Lovely Comment
Hello, It is always so nice to see you stop by Titus. Thank you for reading my poem and leaving this nice comment. I so appreciate it. You are so right with your thoughts of where it came from. Most of my poems come from feelings in my heart. You have a nice day. Take care.
Bless you, Sandy
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WONDERFUL!!!!!!
Ah, how you are able to feel what I am going through A beautiful and touching write my dear friend.
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Your comment was lovely Kevin. Thank you for always stopping by. I hope things are going well for you. I will keep you in my thoughts and prayers my friend. Take care.
Bless you, Sandy
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so true
oh.. wow, thank u so muh, u have turned my feelings into words. am in love no ...totally, and these :
Sweet kisses like wine drew me in deep,
pleasant dreams of you invade my sleep.
How could this be wrong, it feels so right.
held safe in your arms holding me tight.
Still temping to me, love will not cease,
each passing day sees longing increase.
The power of love can be so strong,
safe in your arms is where I belong.
are the lines that really are true. esp "how could be this be wrong if it feels so right?" so true. thanx
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Hello, I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. I do write whast I feel. I appreciate your lovely comment. You take care, Sandy
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the power
The power of love. At times simply magical a simply magical pieace of writing
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. It is always nice when you stop by. Yes love is magical and also very painful. Wish I had a magic wand to take the pain away. You take care Sandy
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Now this sounds like something that I would say...Thank you for sharing this,its truely beautiful!!
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving this nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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Very nice. Certainly one I related to.
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Great Comment!! Thank you for stopping by. You take care, Sandy
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An excellent poem with such feeling of longing. Well done.
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Lovely comment you have written. Thank you for reading my poem. You take care, Sandy
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excellent
very well said, great flow of thoughts. Your word choice simulates the depth of the longing. Best wishes in the contest.
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Good morning my friend. Thank you for the nice comment. Always a pleasure to read your thoughts. Take care, Sandy
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