We might try
To worldproof
Our children,
Instead of trying
To childproof
The world...........
A contest entry
- simple by Melissa Gayle.
360 points, ended September 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - So Easy Even An Idiot Could Do It by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended November 23, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Thought-provoking in such a few words. A mighty undertaking now-adays, but I can see no more promising alternative! May we be blessed with the wisdom to do so.
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Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. You have said tons in just a few words. It is definetly good food for thought.
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I think the only thing to do is prepare the children for the world.
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wow this is pretty awesome. simply put but in reality it is a complex thing but you have written this wonderfully
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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