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Comfort/Help

Fear.Anger.Sadness.
I was so lost

.Keep Breathing.

Deep gulps of air
I couldn't breath properly
Silent tears roll down my face
He couldn't help me
He was too personally involved
But he could comfort me

.Stay Calm.

Home I went, I couldn't help it
I couldn't act normally
Too lost, too upset
He asked what was wrong
I told me, still not breathing properly
Suddenly all windows were open
He couldn't comfort me
He was too young
But he could help me

Kept the younger kids occupied
kept them away from me
Told them what was wrong

.Go Home.

Got off the bus, I was so tired
I wanted to Hide.Scream.Cry
I looked up as the bus drove past me
And there they were
All smiling and waving goodbye to me

They put a smile on my face
When my world was falling apart

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  • Walking Tall
    September 24, 2007
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    wow...
    i just feel wrapped in your poem
    smothered
    drowing
    in your emotions
    wow...
    seej