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I breathe You

Arose with sensual thoughts of you
Lust in my veins awakens hunger
My enticing nipples rise, I hold them
Seductively I whisper your name, oh touch me here
Let you tongue satiate waves of passion
Oh baby come inside of me
I feel, taste and breathe you
I see heaven in your eyes
I dance in ecstasy of nirvana delights
Goddess explode in sparking sexual bliss













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  • penman gold member
    January 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • Glasyalabolas
    September 25, 2007

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    I like this, very discriptive but without being starkly over-descriptive.

    Good write and congrats on bronze.


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 25, 2007

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    good take on this picture I used for the contest.
    thank you and I am glad I waited for this.

    Riftkin