It sends shivers up my spine,
And chills through my bones,
To know i've got you,
As my own,
It gives me hot and cold fever,
And ties my stomach in knots,
To know you're mine,
Here to stay,
It puts my heart in my throat,
And my lungs stay frozen,
To know i've got you,
As my own,
It makes me numb to pain,
And hightens sensations,
To know you're mine,
Here to stay,
It leaves me blind sighted,
And deaf to all words,
To know i've got you,
As my own,
It teases my every sense,
And drives me crazy,
To know you're mine,
Here to stay,
It plays games with my head,
And wins every time,
To know i've got you,
As my own,
...You're mine...
Author notes
it's odd
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Comments
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Is not. It's wonderful and captures the perfect feelings of love. You should be proud of this piece, I know I am.
Keep it up.
Cj
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Love does all these things and more! I like the way you were able to express your feelings in such a flowing easy to follow way. Thank you for your entry.
Love and luck in all you endeavor.
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Cute Write!
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It puts my heart in my throat,
And my lungs stay frozen,
To know i've got you,
As my own,
It makes me numb to pain,
And hightens sensations,
To know you're mine,
Here to stay,
It leaves me blind sighted,
And deaf to all words,
To know i've got you,
As my own,
I think we have all been blind-sided by love at on time or another. Thanks for the great write nad good luck in the contest.
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