We lay you down to sleep,
remembering the days we had
Nothing more then memories left,
we bow our heads and weep...
A contest entry
- Quantum Thoughts by islekine.
600 points, ended October 8, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I do understand.
And I believe all thoughts are quantum thoughts when they flow outside the box. Thanks for your entry!
*PEACE^
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I'm sorry but I don't really understand this at all and I REALLY don't understand it in relation to the contest criteria. I like what you have said though, if you don't factor in the whole concept of the contest. Good luck to ya!
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Now I get it, I now understand what are you saying.
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nice flow and organization of ideas..
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