She calls to the spirits of the storm,
invoking this tempest to assuage her needs.
Her divinity craves to be ruler yet conquered
as her elements assault, anointing their goddess.
Thunderbolts crash , lightning pierces her soul
yet all are so very much a part of her.
She groans her satisfaction with the performance of her slaves
satiating her desperation of true fulfillment.
As her soul breathes deeply from this wild encounter,
she once again exhales until her desires once more demand gratification.
Author notes
10 lines - Picture prompt
A contest entry
- Picture Quicke (I'm bored) Goddess of the Storm by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a splendid piece of poetry penned, the sky's aligh with passion's dance, sighs and moans accompany the performance, and breath flirts with wild hunger.
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Oooh, this is really good.
Love your take on the picture, and so much more.
Nicely done.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
Wow!!
Powerful piece penned Sweet One
Words to bring images of empowerment
Love these lines:
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Her divinity craves to be ruler yet conquered
as her elements assault, anointing their goddess.
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Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Best wishes to You in the contest!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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oh wow this wa san amazing take on the picture and you really expressed it well bringing it to life using metaphors
it flowed beautifully from one line to the next
well done
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wow fab write, some brilliant wording used and fantastic imagery. well done and good luck! x
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