You've found your place
among natures deluge
you have sexual squaller
you burst loves power storm
gales of laughter
drenching torrential lust
sopping floods and gust
thundering slapping clap
pounding flesh of your lap
lightning strikes climatic bodies Jolt.
Author notes
picture prompt
A contest entry
- Picture Quicke (I'm bored) Goddess of the Storm by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Talking of storms, tidal waves, lighting here,drenched in that powerful storm....such imagery,undercurrent of meaning throughout. Last stanza the flow and rhyme adds power to the clap,slap and JOLT...Sensual impact!
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Hmmm, love the jolt
Very nicely done take on the picture.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
wow
this is great. not only very fitting as to the picture but very expressive, emotional and full of vivid imagery babe 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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