I never got a chance to tell you
How exactly how I feel
To have met you
I never thought that would have so much appeal
I know the day I met you
You were surfing on the net
It was before our sparks flew
I didn't know what you meant to me yet
I didn't realize how much you meant to me
Until you thought you couldn't go on
I just prayed all night you could hold on
I remember you told me
If you didn't make it, you'd meet me at The Gate
All I could do is trust in God
I know that he would hold our true Fate
I don't want to doubt God
In any shape, way or form
But the bond we have is the farthest from the norm
Tonight I was mad
And crying over the porcelain dome
I couldn't stop wishing you were here
And in New Zealand we could roam
Maybe we could have a better life
As we live in South Island
I don't think nothing else would matter to me
I doubt I'd care about a diamond
Jeremiah I treasure you
So incredibly much
You were the first one that made me truly touched
Funny and charismatic
Sarcastic and puts up a fight
Aloof and intimate
Possibly a love at first sight
You don't know how I want to meet you
Or maybe you possibly do
Through two years, I've seen how the both of us grew
Sweetheart, don't ever give up
Not ever on your life
I pray that God eases your pain
And eases up your strife
Everyday I hope
I can make you smile
One day I hope to see it
Even if its only a little while
How I would love to touch you
And to feel your masculine embrace
To pick me up with one had
Or how your saliva would taste.
I reach into my computer
And desperately reach out to you
Wishing I could
And morph there to you
So your Mum is in Chicago
Having a good time
You know how I wish you were here
...Get here one day...
I'll never fall out of love with you.
♥
Author notes
This is for the only guy I have only truly fell in love with. I live near Chicago, and I feel like I'll never get over this guy. I met him on here, and -- I'm speechless. Let me know what you think. Thanks. T.A.G
Please tell me what you think.
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Beautiful write, The emotion was strong and captivating...
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Time heals everything, keep going strong and I'm sure you two will finally get to be together. This write was really heart felt and regardless of how it sounded or any technicalities, you could tell it was what YOU feel, and YOU think. That makes it amazing. I'll keep you in my prayers girl, always. Much love.
Bekah
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I hope that there will be that day both of you will get to hold each other and make it last a lifetime. Love can be a good thing when it rolls in your favor!
Ted E
PS: I hope the both of you will have the best relationship ever!
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This is sweet
Love makes us do things sometimes that we wouldn't do regularly. Falling for someone sight unseen is one of those things. If it is to be...then it will happen. I wish you the best of luck in your life and want you too know, I love you! The Shaker
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"I remember you told me
If you didn't make it, you'd meet me at The Gate"
This whole piece is amazing. I'm not too sure if it was this or the other that you wanted me to read... or another all together... I'm so silly at times (always) but this is amazing. I loved it, you really need to make sure he sees these, email him this hey. He may not see it on here
As I said, love prevails and conquers all, if this is love, as I suspect it is, then one day you'll meet
Wishing you the best,
Bandaid.
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Sweet, hun, real sweet.
Naturally, there are some grammatical mistakes but I won't point them all out this time.
This is very heartfelt, and lovely in its own way.
* I think you should consider learning about/trying prose.
-Allura
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