Firmament of ever after
A vault to cover our indiscretions
Melted passing clock ticks
Swelter past glorious twilight
While passion's breath collides
With sparks of chemistry
Forming fusion of synergy
Glass breaks
Along the path
Sand converted
Within our
Inferno
Author notes
In The Heat Of The Moment
A contest entry
- PAY IT FORWARD QUICKIE CONTEST! 10/40/20 by Jeremy0826.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this was a beautiful write so full of imagery and emotions and was very hot and awsome
i loved it well done
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wow, talk about het babe
you not only have all the hot words but the emotions and imagery too, wonderful job my dear 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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"synergy", "inferno", 'swelter' - I love all the powerful words you've used with this piece. This is a beautiful poem.
Good luck in the contest.
DancingRed.
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Wow, brilliant take on the prompt and a joy
to read. Thanks a lot for your entry and all
the best to you in my contest!
Jeremy0826 -
wow this was great! really good take on it!
Goodluck my friend!
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Very different, in such a brilliant way. Words to dive into and actually feel the entirety of thought. Awesome write! Best wishes in the contest!wlm
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Wow. That was quite an interesting take on the prompt. I loved the words you used. Scientific, and yet they formed beauty in art.
Write on!
~*~SP~*~
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