Tension intensifies aching pores in my dream
Craving years of lustful sins my body scream
Dynamite passions storm tonight
A strike of powerful lightening ignite
Raging I thunder in all my might
Flawless wanton flesh pleasures excite
Stroke your dynamic manhood in action
Satiate groans electrified satisfaction
Throbbing shower, rain drop ecstatic adventure
Falling sedative spells on land I venture
A contest entry
- Picture Quicke (I'm bored) Goddess of the Storm by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow!!
Thank You for sharing this with us and Powerful
piece penned
especially the:
stroke your dynamic manhood in action
Wowzers!!
Love this!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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very naughty!
but in a real good way
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While the write is good, and explores deep erotic tastefully, part of it has me a bit confused. Perhaps I am just out of it right now, but honestly, I am having issues deciphering if this is written in the perspective of male or female, as it seems to cross over.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Thanks storm the poem is written in perspective of male and female.
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Captures a wetness...me thinks
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WOW amazing write. I love the imagery here and the passion behind this write is great. Good use of rhyme and it flows well. fab write, well done and good luck!
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