pressed firmly to the wall
by your lips upon mine
hands running up and down
my curves, neck to thigh
pressed firmly to the wall
by fingernails in your chest
whispers sung into your ear
now to your bed, undressed
Author notes
40 kinky steamy words
its harder working with only 30 minutes than i thought it would be!
A contest entry
- PAY IT FORWARD QUICKIE CONTEST! 10/40/20 by Jeremy0826.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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OH!! Nicely done!!
A very steamy write indeed!
Wonderfully penned!!
I wish you all the best
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very nicely done subtle yet sexy write. simple yet sweet. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Wow; great expression of feeling. I see you've worked in some rhyme as well.
Good luck in the contest!
DancingRed.
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I love the imagery and feel of this.
I think you did a great job with this one!
Thanks a lot for your entry and best of
luck to you with it here!
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thank you so much!
this turned out really fun!!!
great contest!!!!
....haha
this was suposed to be a reply to Jeremy's comment
but i think i messed it up on accident
lol.....
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very sensual and you did great !
goodluck
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thank you!!!
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