Electric Goddess of the stormy night
Show us all how you doth ignite
Ponderings of why you tantalize and tease
Struck down by a bolt, or did want me on my knees?
Allow me entrance with my electric train
I will not leave until I alleviate your pain
Plug me in, recharged and ready to please
You are deserving of satisfying your plea's
I am here to serve and kneel to thy might
Completing my duty under this burnt moonlight.
A contest entry
- Picture Quicke (I'm bored) Goddess of the Storm by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You've Been...Hood-Winked!!!
And the trend continues, another poem, another trophy, I'm starting to get jealous!!!
Loved the title and as per usual your imagery and word choice is fantastic. I think the final couplet is my favourite part, especially the "burnt moonlight" description.
If the next poem I find has a trophy *grumbles*, only joking you deserve them!
Take care
x
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Hmmmm, on knees and not leaving till the pain is gone?
I think I can fake that pain, lol.
Nice, very nice.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
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thank you
thank you Goddess, my reward is much appriciated and glad i could please the other write were exceptional i must admit. thanks again
michael -
thank you
and i am here to please
lol
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well written write, love the wording and description, and I love the idea of being on your knees!
best of luck and well done xx -
wow dear one
this is one train ride i would like
but it looks like that Storm has you on your knees
and yep if I know her she will keep you there
Riftkin -
wow, what a nice strong sensual write, very pleasing to read but it would be easier if the colors weren't so dark
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Choo Choo!!!
Or should I say: Chew Chew!!!
WOW! This was great!
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang
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