Kissing slowly
Feeling his smooth skin
His hands moving up and down my body
With the love radiating through the air
It makes it harder to hold back
The moment is too perfect
The feeling too strong
Then it just happens
Author notes
prompt: in the heat of the moment.
A contest entry
- PAY IT FORWARD QUICKIE CONTEST! 10/40/20 by Jeremy0826.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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That was graphic lol. I love this though. Very sweet, and very sexy. And I get what you mean when you say the moment was to perfect and it just happens. I like the way you worded it. It's hard to write a sexy poem without it being dirty, but you did it. Bravo.
Megan -
i guess i don't have to ask what the "IT" is you talk about here
great take on the prompt 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Great work here and thanks a lot
for your entry in my contest.
I appreciate it and wish you the
best of luck with it!
Jeremy0826 -
Mmmm, lovely piece you've penned here. Good luck in the contest!
DancingRed.
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forget these
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Simple and erotic very good!
Goodluck
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