She laughs at the world of mortals
as broken hearts gaze at her electrical light
Drenching manhood as she belittles
knowing the cold shower is their plight
Never having a man to please her
savoring the smell of rain and morning dew
Not aspiring to human adventure
destroying her chance at love anew
A goddess of the heavenly hierarchy
fearful of death that comes with mortality
Author notes
Quicky - 10 Liner Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- Picture Quicke (I'm bored) Goddess of the Storm by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ouch! This has a few bolts jolting down in all the wrong places. Thank the heavens I'm StormGoddess and not the goddess of the storms, lol.
Though, I get a lot of what is here.
Nice take on the picture.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Good. well written.
I love the idea of this goddess laughing at mortals, really makes me think she's really there taking the p**s out of all! lol well done and good luck !! xx -
very good
this is more complex than i expected from this prompt, very well done showing us mere mortals how this should be done.
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wow, this is a really intense write full of strong emotion. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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