A Hunger To Love Him

Fire burned my heart

his hands caressed my face

sweetly wiping the sweat from my cheeks

flushed and alittle flustered

finally relaxed in strong arms

A kiss became deeper

passion arose through my being

souls connected with able lips

thinking never stop

a need , a hunger to love him

A contest entry

PAY IT FORWARD QUICKIE CONTEST! 10/40/20 by Jeremy0826. 300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Liquid memories
September 24, 2007

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wonderful, you really put this together with emotions.very sweet, enjoyed the flow. the picture goes great with your words. Thanks for sharing.
jasminerose
September 24, 2007

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OH Congratulations on winning!!!!!! This will be a wonderful suprise with your cup of "DECAF"
Linda
HeavenScent4U
September 24, 2007

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wow this is gorgeous and so sensual, such a pleasure to read. may i ask where you got that picture from? it was perfect for this poem, very beautiful. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
Jeremy0826
September 24, 2007

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This is such a beautifully sensuous write.
I really enjoyed reading this one!
Thanks a lot for your entry and all
the best to you with it in my contest.
I appreciate it!

Jeremy0826
SpydurPoet
September 24, 2007

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This was so beautiful. Sensually sweet, you did a breathtaking piece with the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
Write on!
~*~SP~*~
DancingRed
September 24, 2007

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A beautiful, poweful piece. The scene you paint really comes to life. Good luck in the contest!

DancingRed.
jasminerose
September 24, 2007
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OOOO An excellent take off the prompt!
Very beautiful sensual penning!! Hot stuff here! I wish you all the best in the contest my friend
PerfectImperfection
September 24, 2007

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This was very well penned, with a deep sense of longing throughout. Nicely done! Best wishes in the contest!
Cerulean Sunrise
September 23, 2007
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This was really good.
keep burning girl!