"Meet me"~
She softly whispers;
“By the water cooler
near the tenth floor”
Ravage my body
in essence of lust~
Take me as your own
I'll make all your fantasies
come true
In the heat of the moment…
He faints!
Author notes
Prompt:In the heat of the moment…
All I have to add is.. we all do and say strange things in the heat of the moment!
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A contest entry
- PAY IT FORWARD QUICKIE CONTEST! 10/40/20 by Jeremy0826.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is great and you did an excellent job here and congradulations on the wonderful Gold.
Riftkin -
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Thank you so very much for your good cheer and wonderful compliments!!!
Linda
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Congrats on winning gold.
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Thank you so very much
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hehe
that was cute
i like how you made it a story
so concise!!!
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oooooooooooooooooooooolala very nice and the ending couldn't have been more perfect
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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LOL! This is great and very humorous.
Thanks a lot for your entry here.
I appreciate it and wish you the best
of luck with it in my contest!
Jeremy0826 -
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Thank you Jeremy for the lovely trophy!! I shall be paying it forward tomorrow evening!! Hope you don't mind but I have to go catch some beauty sleep..lol Up very bright an early!!
Thank you again for the wonderful contest and for your very enjoyable comments on my entry!!!
Jasminerose
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Hah- the ending made me laugh. This is a lovely, light-hearted piece. Great take on the prompt.
Good luck in the contest.
DancingRed.
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Very nice take on the prompt! Well thought lines of intrigue, lovely penning! Best wishes in the contest!
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this was great and really showed some humor , great work!
Goodluck my friend!
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