The time is nigh, this is the hour
to put away the childish things
When given a gift, when given power,
with responsibility, he swings.
Fate brought Peter to be a freak
An arachnid in human form
Now he's a man but still a geek
and he is ready for the storm.
The spider man is wrought with guilt
and broods with dark regret
for the sticky past of webs he's built
and every tragedy he's met.
Clinging to hope, clinging to walls
his inner strength is just enough
to sense that fear... it has no claws
Heroes are made with super stuff.
A contest entry
- Spiderman by TheD.O.C..
300 points, ended October 20, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
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this is wonderfully written
you did an awesome job here
Riftkin -
Ca-Ching!!
SPIDERMAN RULES!!!! He's the ultimate Hero! *Ooh my spidey sense is tingling* Haha! Love this one. Your poems are so full of LIFE! They either bring laughs, joy, or make you think. -
not one for reding poetry on suoperheroes lol i watched hellboy yesterday on tv - not seen the new spiderman one though
but i do like the first 2 films
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what a great poem... it brings out the dark side of spiderman... good job sir... ;-)
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Thanks! I love emo Spidey. He looks great in black.
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OOOOOOOOoooooooooo Like it!
Much creepy adventure and intrigue surrounding Spiderman and we love it!
A poem that crawls into the reader's mind and makes her smile! 
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