It was before the sky fell
before dilations and exhalations
Comings
goings
etc...
Etc...
Before the blink
the flicker
and the orgasm
that there was the expansion
the crunch
and the silence
Shantih
Peccavi
Forgive me
It's my fault
Goodbye
Author notes
Shantih: Hindi for peace
Peccavi: Latin for I have sinned
A contest entry
- simple by Melissa Gayle.
360 points, ended September 24, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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What is your fault?
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
i don't know if this is quite so simple, seems like if it was, you made it very complicated 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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