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I want you to show interest
and to care just a fraction the amount
I'm insane for you.
I wish you never left,
and if I could break my promise not to lie,
I'd say I wish you never came.




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  • xbyebyebeauty
    September 28, 2007
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    I loved the ending so much..


  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    September 24, 2007
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    Bittersweet, isn't it. Well done.


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 24, 2007

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    simple but full of strong emotion, sad but strong best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    September 24, 2007
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    you are stunning baby
    absolutley stunning.
    so is this.
    illllly
    xx
    ♥


  • BeautifulNightmare
    September 24, 2007

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    Awesome, as always.
    Your the only writer i know that can pack so much power into so few lines.

    xXx xXx xXx


  • A n u k e t
    September 24, 2007
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    Gorgeous love, pure gorgeous.

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