there are no stars
reflecting your eyes
though you
perpetuate dreams
I think of past
lovers
strangers
to your arms
just
as I am,
this very moment.
A contest entry
- simple by Melissa Gayle.
360 points, ended September 24, 2007, 15 entries
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i feeel lonelyness also as i read this poem
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At least you don't have to whisper,you can scream your yearnings lol good luck in the contest..mm
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Is U sure you didn't mean Linda instead of Lydia!! Jest kiddin!' Kidding aside, it's a great poem. Yer sister-in-law ♥ Bellie
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There is a loneliness in these words.
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Good Morning, This is such a sweet and lovely poem you have written. I can sense the longing to be with someone you miss. I know that feeling so well. I feel that way every morning when I awake. Your poem was a pleasure to read. Wonderful and heartfelt!!!! You take care, Sandy
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this is indeed simple in it's writing but very powerful for few words. i really like this but then again, i have liked everything of yours i have been lucky enough to come across
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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This is excellent
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i love this. you certainly have a way with words. good luck
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Another great entry!
Well done. Good luck!
*PEACE*
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I love the simplicity of this piece. Excellent. And, full of profound intimate strangeness.
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