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The best is yet to come

Sometimes the best things
Are the ones you least expect,
And are the ones
Most worth waiting for.

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  • slipperssun gold member
    October 26, 2007

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    but be simple and should but sure packs a powerful message in it... thanks for the entry into my contest and i wish you well
    cheers
    Jen


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    So true

    I like this a lot


  • Procrastination
    October 1, 2007

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    Short and sweet =]
    Such powerful words in such a short poem. Well done, I liked this alot, it was very good.
    Good luck in the contest.
    Chemical kisses,
    Emily x


  • Silvos. silver member
    September 24, 2007
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    Well spoken, and very true. I like this alot!

    Well done and good luck,
    Silvos.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    September 24, 2007
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    Quite true.


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    September 24, 2007

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    Simple, but true!!!!  I love poems with few words and huge messages!!!!!!! I think you've pulled that off well. I am primarily a rhymer, but I do read and write other types sometimes.

    I think this one is a good one!!!!!!!!!! 


  • Malabu
    September 24, 2007

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    I like this

    and so true....the best things in life
    are those which come unexpected...we may thrive to achieve and enjoy success
    but those that come unexpected are enjoyed with added elations..
    Mal


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 24, 2007

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    this is very simple and very nice and it is a great truth that i wish more people had faith in vest of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • islekine gold member
    September 24, 2007

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    Well now...

    I wouldn't want to have to judge this one! Great entry.
    Write on and Good luck in the contest!
    This is good! I love short and to the point!
    *PEACE*

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