Putting it simply:
I have always loved you;
love you now;
and am looking forward
to loving you
until I, or you, die.
Now let me get you
a nice cup of tea.
A contest entry
- simple by Melissa Gayle.
360 points, ended September 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Simple, yes. A love such as this is a beautiful thing.
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simple yes, interesting, yes. the last line is just so precious
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Yes!
This is good. Good luck in the contest!
*PEACE*




