The smell of you, enticing.
Something I've never felt before.
I can hear your blood pumping,
Fast, like prey before it's caught.
I can see you fidget.
Hear your breath hitch,
As my hand caresses your leg.
You turn your head and stare into my malicious eyes.
Just as I'm about to lose control,
A stick is slammed on our desk.
Apparently, our science teacher doesn't like
Whats going on.
So I stop.
But you are still staring at me.
I can feel your eyes boring into me.
Soon a note saying "Meet me out back"
Is left in my hand, as you walk out the door.
What a perfect opportunity , my lovely
Beautiful, prey.
Besides, no one will miss
A no body like you, in a town like this.
A contest entry
- Vampire Dreams... by gothgirl612.
440 points, ended September 30, 2007, 11 entries
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What a perfect opportunity , my lovely
Beautiful, prey.
Besides, no one will miss
A no body like you, in a town like this.
Sad to be thought of as a no body and not missed
Riftkin -
That's great, from the perspective of Edward from Twilight....very unique!
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