Blue eyes
Intense, intense
With caring passion
Love and lust
You stare right into me,
Right into my eyes
Smile, Smile
Your awkward smile
So cute on you
And I'll blush and giggle
Just like a schoolgirl
Only 'cause you smiled
Guitar, guitar
Strum away
Play that music,
That beautiful music
And I'll fall in love
In love with you
Yet again
Author notes
cheesy much??
new love and good love
im thinking your favorite colors are blue, green, and maybe either black or purple
1) Write about the one you love, your significant other. (If you have more than one, fair enough! Give us some comedy!) How did you meet? Where did you meet? What attracted you? Was it love at first sight? Lust? An intellectual meeting of minds? What sustains you as a couple?
8. you choose something to write about
Lexie like woah
A contest entry
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OMFG! U have a BF great job clap it up!!!! dont forget ur name in author box!
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Very well written. Short and to the point that is what I like. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck.
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great!
i'm definatly loveing the rythem of this poem it's exciteing and expresses the feeling very very well.
good luck
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Sweet write. Thanks for entering :-)
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Thank you for your cute and well stated entry, it's nice to see people happily in love, Josephine
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awww!!! if joey red dis im shure he wuld luve it.
U to our two cuete twogeder.
dontchya jus luve mi spelin twodaye?
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awww this was a wonderful write kiddo and its good to come back home and read it
it was so beautifuly expressed and im happy for you
well done and best of luck
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thanks
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