It hurts me that I once called you friend
Your smile was all pretend
The stupid fake words spoken
And the jokes weren't really jokes just your small relish or token
Merely you just used me for "fun" and made fun of me behind my back
You're lucky I don't give you a smack!
Lucky I'm much more mature then you
You're spineless, cowardice, and a liar too
Don't deny this! For you once told me to my face
"I lie,but it doesn't matter anyway"
"everyone lies"you said
But the truth is you're the only liar I've met
That lies to their friends
Maybe you should think about that before you judge me again
I may not be perfect and sometimes mess up my moral code
But at least I don't feed people a load!
You may be the best Christian ever
And you may be a "good-girl" forever
But deep down inside you're a bad person
So it's all a lie!
Don't fool yourself,I'm glad I'm not you!
Because the one thing that I'd never want to be is fake or untrue.
Please tell me what you think
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You know how to present feelings in poetry very emotional. Very personal piece which is well set and thought through
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Thank you. o.o yeah I try to get across emotion...I mean I figure if you don't have emotion in a poem...what's the point.
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So true and very painful here, all these things, people and thier lives, hurting everyone, everywhere all the time...
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Yeah it's painful.
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I had a friend in junior high and some of high school... she was my "BFF" Outside of school I met a boy who I started dating, and he ended up hurting me pretty bad, physically and emotionally. And despite what HE did to ME.. not only did my friend choose his side over mine, but she started dating him... but you know what I've learned Bev? Karma is a bitch! Don't worry about the person who this is inspired by, she/he will get theirs.
In the end that "friend" of mine was knocked up before graduation by that ex of mine, she is living with her mother, has two meth babies (from him) taken away by CPS and a restraining order against him. Yes my darling Karma ALWAYS comes back. -
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WHOA! that's crazy! o.o ...idk...Karma is pretty bad....that's ONE reason why you should mess with ppl. haha
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bevy,,you will meet liars all your life..you will 'weed them out' ongoing process sadly..great write xp
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aww thanks peter yeah it is sad.
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