to a gray dove’s coo
his mate weeps through a willow
one lone feather,
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My Haiku/Senyru Poetry
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest by misticmoonlite.
675 points, ended September 24, 2007, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oh this was amazing
i loved this poem
and the great way you wrote it
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I lol when I saw it was you,a very unique form of Haiku, thanks for entering and congrats mm
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Doves mate for life, rather like swans. This ku has a dreamlike quality expressing the sadness possibly at the loss of such a beautiful feather. Beautiful and most deserving of the gold
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Comes across as very sad and lonely, in such a short form piece. I like the layout at the end, very effective.
Good write and congrats on gold.
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This is a beautiful haiku...and the way you've placed it on this page adds to its effect. I am that dove...
~ Nicolette
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This form and the contents of feeling relayed in this is phenominal.Talented haiku.
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this form is beautiful, it seems like the mate is calling for its mate,very nice,thanks for your entry,good luck,mm
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