Suddenly
There's no hope in being
B E A U T I F U L
Reality stricken expressions
make it hard to lie
You force it on yourself
You brought this on yourself
Make up for the past
BLOOD RIDDEN & KISSING
Make up with him for
the friends you'll be missing
How can you tell me
things are BETTER this way
So sit on your misery
Indulge in your lies
NOBODY CARES
Deafened with cries
Its amazing what you can be forced to believe
You believe everyone else
Why don't you believe in me?
YOU ONLY
H E A R
WHAT YOU
WANT TO
when will you want to
HEAR THIS
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Written September 29th, 2003
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I've been in this situation before. Forced to believe to wait for the nothing that will eventually happen.
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Darn Good!!
aww..sweetheart you're always so great at wording those impossible, confusing emotions...miss ya..and love ya..~Heidi... -
marshmallows
"Suddenly
There's no hope in being
B E A U T I F U L"
This is so beautiful, not in despite of the anger...but perhaps because of it. I love your writing, and everything about it. Love you -Jena -
I must say I don't really understand that beginning, but the message of the ending is awesome and easily seen. Despite not really understanding the piece, something about it really drew me into it. I still can't really pinpoint it but it's great... great flow and rhyme as well. Awesome job!
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Thats a great poem, people can be so fucked up in this world we live in. The best thing to do is start and try to get over it, as hard as it may seem. Trust me, I've been through something similar.
I love the lines :
"So sit on your misery
Indulge in your lies
NOBODY CARES
Deafened with cries
Its amazing what you can be forced to believe"
Very good, keep up the good work, Write on!
~BrokenDreams
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