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passion's unity

Passion's wild desire burns willingly
~as two souls meet destiny~
Tonight's moon sprays lit beams
~across their full hearts~
Longing gives way to fulfillment
~as hot bodies connect~
Fitting together as the sea and shore
~their world is created~

~UNITY~


9:05PM
05-25-06

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  • Sgt B
    September 23, 2007

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    And minds reel

    And neither one hears, sees or feels anything outside of "Them".
    I really liked this one. Great job!


  • The Boy
    September 23, 2007
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    Short aand beautiful

    I liked it very much.