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Blossom

Basked in sunlit love
breathing life, surrounding
Benneath livid patterns, rays
beholding sunsplashed bursts

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    November 16, 2008
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    Nice job with this poem. I like it. It is short and sweet with vivid imagery.

    Mike