I wish I could send you my heart in a locket
You could wear it 'round your neck, or keep it in your pocket
You'd never be lonely, and your heart never blue
And you wouldn't have to miss me as much as I miss you
A contest entry
- Missing / Longing in 5 lines! by Beating.
600 points, ended October 8, 2007, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is surely short and definitely sweet. The bouncy little rhyme scheme goes quite well with the tone of the poem.
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wow. unbelievable. Truly. The rythm, the rhyming, the wording - it's all just perfect. And I really like the idea of keeping the others heart in a locket around our necks. Great job!
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wow it's amazanig
i love it alot
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