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Lies

How old do you think I am?
How old do you think I'll be
Before these people get to know
The real and true me?
I know everything about them.
Names, favorite singers, hometowns.
I know all about these people,
These people I cannot see now.
But I lied to them about who I am.
I lied and I regret it to the full.

Do you think they'll ever forgive me?
Me and my ungrateful soul?

Author notes

I lied to some very honest people on an mmrpg that I play on the internet. I wrote this when thinking of them.

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  • Naridill
    September 25, 2007

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    Very poetic piece. Intriguing entry. Nicely done. I like the inspiration drawn.

    Much luck