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Betrayed

Summer showers is forecast
Heavy heart beats screaming onwards
cool yourselves down please

A contest entry

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 24, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry..greatimagery nothing like cooling down on a hot summer day! Best wishes, Ken IBT


    • Timespell
      September 24, 2007
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      Thanks Ken,

      But it never lasts long enough in the UK.

      All the best

      ~T.S~