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Eye's Feast

Leaves turn from old green
into Autumn's riotous
colors. The eye's feast

to celebrate the ending
of another harvest time.

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • Tirrell
    August 21, 2008

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    A clever and beautiful thought, I can smell the air of october nearing now Very nice, a beautiful immage.

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 25, 2007

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    Wonderful imagery The present soon falls behind us with change and you have taken us through the seasons and into the harvest of beautiful colors...thank you for your entry, best wishes, Ken IBT


  • AndrewHide silver member
    September 23, 2007

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    This is a good seasonal piece, it builds the scene nicely, it s a strong poem but lacks the tanka pivot which would help.

    A very colourful image and thought, good luck in the contest.

    Andrew